August 18, 2007
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"This is not a drill. This is the Apocalypse."
-Dogma
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"You can't be anal-retentive if you don't have an anus."
-Dogma
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August 12, 2007
Villains
The other day, I read a blog post from a friend of mine about villains and how they don't seem to be really evil anymore. To an extent, I agree with him, but I honestly don't know if it is necassary. To try and figure out what I like in a villain I decided to examine three of my favorites (ended up being four) to try and figure it out. I wasn't too successful because I had a hard time defining exactly what about each villain I liked.
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Objects in Space is one of my favorite episodes of Firefly because of Jubal Early.
But I don't know...I just don't get the evil vibe from villains anymore. Except last night I was watching Fallen and I found their version of Satan to give off really evil vibes.
But I don't know...I just don't get that vibe as much as I'd like to.
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August 07, 2007
Slytherin House
I finished Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows yesterday afternoon. And I was going to write a post last night, but got sidetracked when I got involved with a conversation over IM with a friend who had also read the series. During that he mentioned that he didn't like the epilogue. I agreed with him, but there was one thing I did like about the epilogue.
(Spoilers follow)
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July 28, 2007
Stupids...
Some people are dumb. I always knew it, but recent events have reaffirmed it. It is amazing the number of times you'll see a statement with no actual basis in anything even remotely resembling fact. A recent and frighteningly
common example has been, in Yahoo sports, they mention the various trade rumors concerning Teixeira. In the comments section, I have seen several people mention that the various teams mentioned shouldn't make the trade because Teixeira
is injury prone! This is a player who, until his injury this year, played in more than
500 consecutive games! How in the hell does the 27 games he missed this year outweigh the 500 games he played in previously? What kind of disjointed view of reality does one have to have in order for that to make sense?
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July 15, 2007
Anime
Something I realized was that during the time I've had this, I have not made one, single post about anime. The reason is pretty simple, I haven't seen a new (to me) anime in some time. So I decided to post my basic tastes by ranking the anime I've seen. Now, this is a measure of how much I enjoyed the anime, not necessarily how good it was. Working from memory...
I'll add movies at some point. I'm sure there are series that I am missing, they'll be added as I think of it.
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Baseball: Trading Deadline
I'm not a big fan of baseball though fairly often I watch the Rangers after the NBA season is over and before the NFL season begins to avoid an all out sports drought. So, as a Rangers fan who is pleased by the team's win today, I offer this post...
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July 09, 2007
Offensive Player Rankings
Keep in mind that all of these rankings are a single fan's take on players based a lot on what I've seen and some on what others are saying. If anyone ever reads them, I'm sure they'll disagree on quite a bit...heck I'm not happy with some of it myself...I keep thinking, 'Man, I have that guy ranked really high,' and 'I'd put this guy up here, but these guys have been doing it for years.' In most cases veterans win out. There are a few cases where I feel strongly enough about a young player that I put him over some established players.
Here we go, much anticipated (or not...as the case may be) offensive player rankings.
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July 08, 2007
Football: Player Rankings
I like football and I haven't posted in awhile so here we go: My first annual (wait that doesn't make sense it's the first...it can't be annual)NFL Player Rankings...starting with defense.
I'll get to offensive players at some point...
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June 19, 2007
An idea that will never go anywhere.
Despite all of my rampant pessimism there is a point where I seem to be unfailingly optimistic. I seem to believe that at some point I'll put it together and actually finish some of the ideas for novels I have floating around in my head. I'm still young (22), and the thought seems to be that I will settle down on one thing rather than buzzing between ideas too rapidly to committ them fully to paper (or computer files as the case may be). The furthest I've gotten to actually finishing a novel is a mere 60 pages (or so...I think it is 63 pages) worth of writing (I've got the plan for the rest of the novel and the sequel floating in my head and a very rough outline for everything on paper). I just seem to be unable to actually finish everything. I know I'm only a fifth of the way done with novel, and there are the many repeated drafts to get it to something readable (I'll admit I'm not a great writer...I have a lot of ideas, but the actual execution is not wonderful). Eventually, hopefully, I can get the thing actually published.
But my most recent idea will never get even that far.
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Hi,
What is your target audience? This treatment reads like it is aimed at women, teen to early 30s.
I think almost any idea can be a good story, if you make it plausible and support the suspension of disbelief.
I'd recommend an outline, to address the basic questions your readers will have: why is there a nexus between worlds? What is his destiny going to be? Why are the mystics commited to whatever they've been doing? If you have the causes and effects clear in your own mind, then you will be able to fill in more easily. You'll be able to pick and choose what to share with the audience.
Readers like to be rewarded, to know that everything has a purpose in the story. For example, " young woman in a white robe". Did I need to know her robe was white? What is that telling me about her? Is she good/pure/holy? What does the color white symbolize? Will there be other colors mentioned, that will help me keep track of the characters? Where did she get a robe? Is it a cheap halloween costume? Was it ordered from a theatrical supply company? Did she join a church choir just to get a robe?
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Oh, by the way, if you want to put drafts of a story on your blog, be sure to note that they are copyrighted (c). Designating your work as copyrighted protects your rights to it, and you don't need to register with any authority.
If it is a choice between never getting your story started, or putting parts of it on a blog to get feedback, I say go for it!
Posted by: LD50 at June 21, 2007 09:23 PM (aqV/Y)
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Wow, person...weird.
Target audience? Hmm...considering it now, I can see why it would come off as being directed at young women. I happen to be a bit of a romantic at heart, and this does come off displaying that with the focus of the relationships.
As for the robe, it is white because it is the way I first envisioned it. It has to do with her role within the order of mystics. The order has a long tradition, and those that wait within the nexus for the destined being have always worn white while they take their shifts there.
I may get some sort of outline up eventually. This idea is less developed than most of my ideas (being more recent). I'll see...
Oh, and thank you for your comments.
Posted by: Arson55 at June 22, 2007 02:17 PM (/JGtb)
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Hey Arson.
If you're serious about wanting to get into tv writing, i would recommend you visit this site...
tvwriter.com
It's the gold standard for tv writers. Also, you will need to get proper software that will format for you. That'll run you a couple of hundred bucks. Final Draft and Movie Magic Screenwriter are the two biggies, but there is some way you can set Word up to format for you. I would suggest a google search, and you can find scripts and see how they're formatted to get an idea.
They say a general rule of thumb is that one page of script is equal to one minute of screen time. Also, for screenwriting/tv writing, they say, "show, don't tell." For example, in writing for a novel, you try to be as descriptive as possible to paint a picture for your reader, but when writing for the screen, you try to "get to the point" and allow the action on the screen do the explaining.
For example, in a novel, you might have...
The battle-hardened general sits behind his large wooden desk. He is a grisled man, with a chiseled face and battleship gray hair. The years have not been kind to this man of 55. He has seen his share of war and violence, having earned a Medal of Honor for saving his entire platoon when he singlehandedly took out an insurgent stronghold in Baqouba with nothing more than his trusty, pearl-handled, Colt 45 and a grenade launcher. He is a deeply committed family man, who loves his wife and still mourns the loss of his son who suffered a broken neck while competing in a downhill skiing event. Etc., etc., etc.
In a script, it would be more like this...
INT. GENERAL'S OFFICE -- DAY
A MAN in a military uniform sits behind a desk. His gray hair seems out of place for his fifty something year old body, and twenty something year old physique.
On his desk, we see a framed Medal of Honor which sits next to a framed newspaper clipping. The title reads:
"SKIER KILLED IN MOGUL COMPETITION"
The man is holding a framed picture. We see that it is a picture of himself, a WOMAN, and a YOUNG MAN that was taken at a ski resort.
A tear drops on the picture.
Etc.
Anyway, go check out tvwriter, if you're interested. It's run by Larry Brody who has extensive television writing and producing experience. He also has a writer's workshop in Arkansas, and i think he may even do online courses. As for pitching your idea, there are workshops for that too, but i think it's hard to get your foot in the door to actually pitch it to somebody who can make something happen.
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Username, thank you for your comment.
I'd heard that one page equals one minute (I have a tendancy to watch TV shows and movies I like with commentary on). I will take the time to look at the site you mentioned if I ever have the urge to expand on this idea further. Thank you, again...
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June 18, 2007
Hmm...Post...again...
Damn you reality! Let us try this again...stupid accidently hitting the wrong buttom and losing my post...
Take three...
I have been watching far too much Invader Zim recently. I got the Complete Invasion at Best Buy last week and since then I have watched the entire series and all of the episodes that have commentary again with the commentary. It was a great show.
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June 15, 2007
Hmm...post...
I have to say, I have no idea what I'm going to do with this. I mean, really, I have no life, and I am not clever. But it was free, so...whatever. Besides, I don't expect anyone but me to see this...ever. Because, and lets be honest, I'm a very boring person, and if anyone comes here, they will be bored out of their freakin' minds.
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